Tuesday, January 5, 2016

From the Inside Out -- One Step Deeper into the Art of Writing

Dear Friends,

Please welcome author Alexandria LaFaye, who shares deep (and inspiring) insights into the art of writing. Read on. . .and please leave a comment below. We'd love to hear from you. Thank you!
Author Alexandria LaFaye
 A. LaFaye is a writer, professor, mother of five, and wife. An associate professor of English at Greenville College, she is gearing up to launch their first MFA program in Multimedia Storytelling. She also teaches as a visiting associate professor in the graduate program in Children’s and Young Adult Literature at Hollins University. LaFaye's other titles include: The Keening(Milkweed), Water Steps (Milkweed), and Worth(Aladdin). Catch up with her on Facebook at www.facebook.com/alafayeauthor

Starting on Jan 12, Alexandria will be hosting a series of webinars for KidLit College on character development through worldview. She hopes they can bring in a wonderful crew of writers to explore this element of craft together!
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                     Write Around the Corner by Alexandria LaFaye
I love complexity in language—words, images, and titles that can mean many things. It adds layers to your writing and your reading that allows you to move around in the writing itself, see new things each time you read, so I thought “Write Around the Corner” would be a great way to talk about the subject of layering and subtext in your writing. Words that work for you in a way that brings your own writing and your readers around the next corner to see what might happen next.
Duality in writing—addressing a dual audience, integrating double meaning, and organically weaving in theme—are all complicated and intriguing elements of craft, but for today, let’s focus on double meaning.  I’ll explore it in three elements of craft—slanted dialogue, imagery, and titles.
Let’s go for the easy one first—“Titles”
My latest book PRETTY OMENS is a retelling of the myth of Cassandra set in a Virginian coal mining community in 1911. I chose the title for many reasons.
1. It’s a book about misconceptions and how they can shape the way we see the world around us and the people within it. The narrator Cass Ann Marie Pettibone was miraculously saved as an infant, but everyone believes she’s become a “devil child” and their fears are “confirmed” when she begins to see visions of the future. But are those visions evil or good? 
2. An omen is really just a sign of things to come. But people often see it as an evil word.  Using it and the word “pretty” offers a tension between what many people think when they hear the word “omen” and the positive connotations of “pretty.” Together, they create a thematic connection to the idea of re-seeing things we misunderstand.
3. When Cass Ann Marie sees an omen, she has to draw it, so it’s a pretty omen.
This title works on so many levels, I hope, because it’s directly connected to the book physically (she draws the omens), thematically (re-seeing things we misunderstand), and in terms of the connotations of the words (pretty and omens). These ties create the layering we’re discussing. I’ll call it a discussion because I would love to receive comments from readers to discuss this element of writing in more depth.
If you’d like to get your own copy of PRETTY OMENS, you can order it here:
http://anchorandplumepress.com/shop/pretty-omens
Advanced praise for Pretty Omens:
    In language as lovely as a curling mountain creek, A. LaFaye tells the story of Cass Anne Marie, born during a nasty winter on Crowley’s Ridge. Loved back to life by her mama, the young girl is shunned by the mining community because of her gift of omens. And yet this gift might prove to be their salvation. Pretty Omens, a story-in-poems by a pitch-perfect author, reads like a classic. —Mary Logue, author of Sleep Like a Tiger andLake of Tears
     In LaFaye’s strong, fast-paced novel-in-verse, the voices of her characters ring true, the language dazzles, drawing the reader into Cass Anne’s story of love and redemption, religious intolerance, and belief. —Paul Janeczko, author of Firefly, July, Publisher’s Weekly Book of 2014
      Told in sparse free verse poems, LaFaye’s gritty tale of a young girl’s struggle against a town’s superstitions, is both powerful, and heartbreaking, and ultimately inspiring. —Han Nolan, National Book Award winner, Dancing on the Edge
                                       

Let’s move on to the layering of imagery. I first came to understand how an image can be layered by reading “Oranges” by Gary Soto. It introduced me to a concept I like to call “impacked imagery.” This is the use of enjambment to get two images for the price of one. Let me show you:
In the poem, the narrator is about to meet up with a girl he is smitten with. He says,
She came out pulling
At her gloves, face bright
With rogue, I smiled,

Ending the line with “pulling” opens a narrative gap—an opening in a text that is intended to be filled by the writer and the reader together.  In the fraction of a second between that line and the next the reader is asking, pulling what? And answering—the door closed or something like that and when they read “at her gloves,” they’ve seen the door close and watched her put on her gloves—that’s an impacted image-2 for the price of one.

He does it again with “bright” because we think she’s blushing from nerves or the cold and in reality, she’s wearing makeup.

Here’s a link to Soto’s full poem on the Poetry Foundation website, a resource you should make use of regularly for the wealth of poetry, audio poems, and articles on the genre.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse/142/3#!/20599498/0
You can create impacted imagery through paying careful attention to how you end one line of poetry with a narrative gap and closing that gap in the next line. Notice the use of specific and suggestive words at the end “pulling” and “bright.”
If you’d like to know more about my take on imagery, here’s a post on the subject on my blog WORDY WANDERINGS REST STOP
https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/130361.A_LaFaye/blog
That brings us to the hardest form of duality and layering in writing—slanted dialogue.  Writing dialogue that says many things at the same time through layering is called “slanted” because it never says what it means directly. When people who know each other speak, their word choices, body language, and allusions are filled with double meaning because they have a history together. The trick is bringing all of that out in your writing.  Allow me to use an example from my novel THE YEAR OF THE MAN. In this scene, we join Nissa Bergen and her mother Heirah on their front porch in Harper, Louisiana in 1933:

Just because Papa and I knew Mama was gone didn't mean the whole town of Harper had to find out.  Of course, if Miss Chessie Roubidoux got even a whiff of trouble from our place, she'd be making up stories and spreading them about faster than thistle down in a windstorm. One year, she had everyone in town believing Mama practiced Voodoo on account of the fact she drank hibiscus tea. Miss Chessie was walking past our place on her way to the post office and she saw me and Mama sitting out on the porch sipping our fresh, brewed-in-the-sun hibiscus tea.  She stopped in the street and stared at us, the dust settling in our her shiny shoes. Wiping the sweat from her face with the handkerchief she keeps hanging over her belt, Miss Chessie said, "What on earth are you drinking, Heirah Rae Bergen?"
    Mama held up her glass and shook it a little so the flower petals in the tea would float around a bit.  I could tell by the smile on her face that Mama was thinking up a good answer. "Hibiscus tea." 
    I was disappointed. I usually got a good laugh over watching Miss Chessie stomp off after Mama served her up a little just deserts. 
    "Hibiscus tea? What is that? Some Voodoo brew you picked up from them colored folk down at the Tar Baby?"
    Mama was good friends with the folks down at the Tar Baby Cafe. We were one of the only white families in there on any given day. I loved their alligator jambalaya. It was so hot, it made my mouth itch for days.  Most white folks thought it was a sin to mix with black folks, but Mama didn't give a damn. Neither did Papa. I didn't even bother thinking about it.
    Now Miss Chessie, she thought all black folks were evil because she thought they were into Voodoo magic. She was sure Voodoo was devil worship. Mama just played right along with Miss Chessie's stupid beliefs.
    "Why, yes Chessie. This is straight from a witch doctor's kitchen." Mama held her tea up higher.  "It'll shrivel the kidneys of my enemies." Mama took a big gulp.
    I bit my lip to keep from giggling as Miss Chessie glared at Mama's glass of tea. She said, "You're evil, Heirah Rae Bergen. And I'm going to see that this entire town knows it."
    Mama licked her lips. "You do that, Chessie." 
    Miss Chessie stomped off shouting. "A woman like you shouldn't be allowed to have children."  She turned back to say, "Wit your evil ways, you'll make that sweet girl just like you!"
    Mama squeezed my hand, saying,"She'll be just like herself." She stood up, went to the porch railing, then raised up her glass so Miss Chessie could see it. "Here's to your health, Chessie!"
    Miss Chessie just shook her head then charged into the post office all ready to spread lies about Mama.

Notice how much these two women say to each other without speaking it out loud, Chessie is a racist who thinks Heriah Rae is an inadequate mother, unmannered, and shameful. On the other hand, Heirah Rae thinks Chessie is a superstitious busybody who should mind her own business and basically tells her, “I hope your kidneys shrivel up and you die, you old prune” just by toasting to her health. In this scene I engaged the speakers in an everyday discussion that revealed their inner motivations by how they said what they said. 

For instance, Chessie didn’t ask, “What are you drinking?” She said, “What on earth are you drinking, Heirah Rae Bergen?” The use of all three names suggests a scolding by a superior.
Physical descriptions also help, Chessie’s handkerchief over her belt and shiny shoes suggest her prim and proper nature.

So, in this short scene, we learn loads by not only what was said, but what was implied.  That’s slanted dialogue. 

If you’d like to share more misadventures with Nissa and her mama, please check out THE YEAR OF THE SAWDUST MAN and its sequel NISSA’S PLACE from Milkweed Editions (Let’s hear it for Indie Publishers!).
http://milkweed.org/shop/product/126/the-year-of-the-sawdust-man/
Questions anyone? I‘d love to discuss this topic further.  In fact, if you have anything at all you’d like to chat about in terms of writing, reading, or any other subject, please share a comment on this blog.
You can also e-mail me at a@alafaye.com.
Visit my website at www.alafaye.com.
Tweet me @artlafaye
Check out my blog at https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/130361.A_LaFaye/blog
Or stop by my facebook page at: https://www.facebook.com/alafayeauthor
I’m around. Please reach out to connect.

Thank you so much, Alexandria, for sharing pearls of writing wisdom. And thank you everyone for stopping by to share your thoughts. Don't forget to check out Alexandria's links for more about her books and the craft of writing. Happy New Year!

THIS JUST IN: Alexandria just wrote that she's offering a FREE book to one lucky reader who leaves a comment. How cool is that?

35 comments:

  1. Pretty Omens sounds phenomenal!! LOVE the cover. I also love thinking about slanted dialogue. Thanks for this, Clara!

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    1. Natalie, Thank you so much. I hope you're able to track down a copy of Pretty Omens. I'd love to hear what you think of the book and the slant to the dialogue within. Alexandria

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  2. Thanks for sharing your impressions, Natalie! Your name is entered in the drawing for a copy of the book.

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  3. Great post, Clara. I always like a peek into authors' brains and how they go about their creative process.

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    1. Peering inside the brain of a writer is fun, isn't it, Kathy? I think Alexandria's is quite a treat.

      Your name is entered for a chance to win Pretty Omens.

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    2. Thanks, Clara and Kathy. I'll use a term like "impacted imagery" with my students and they'll ask, where can we learn more about that?" And I'll tell them, "Sadly, they don't issue library cards to my brain. No wait, that's probably a good thing for you. It's a mess up there!"

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  4. This is a fabulous post to start off the new year! Loved the insight and examples of how a writer can create layers in exposition and dialogue. Thanks, Clara and Alexandria!

    P.S. I'm a big fan of KidLit College. Cheers!

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    1. Thank you, Jilanne, for stopping by. I agree that this is a fabulous post to start off the New Year.

      Your name is entered for a chance to win!

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    2. Julianne,
      Thank you so much. Did you take a course with Kidlit College? What on?

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  5. Oooo, love this post. I understand about using rhythm in the words you choose (even in novels). I speak of stressed and unstressed words. We need to pay attention to these. I'm not talking about rhyme either. This post got the wheels to spinning. Haha. I learned a lot. Thank you, Clara, for having Alexandria over. :-)

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    1. Robyn,
      "Got the wheels to spinning" is music to my ears! I'm always thrilled when something I've said inspires another writer!
      Cheers!
      Alexandria

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  6. Thank you, Robyn, for adding to the discussion. This post is a treasure for writers, isn't it?

    Your name is entered for a chance to win a copy of Pretty Omens!

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  7. So thrilled to learn of another new author I need to read!

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    1. Alexandria has a writing voice that transports the reader. I think you'll really love her books, Leslie.

      Your name is entered for a chance to win Pretty Omens.

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    2. Leslie and Clara,
      Thank you so much. I hope you are able to track down one of my books and give it a read. If you do, please share your thoughts. Thank you!
      Alexandria

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  8. Love the book cover and the phrase, 'In language as lovely as a curling mountain creek.' Nice review.

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    1. That line grabbed me, too, Janet! In fact, I thought of your book when I read that.

      Thanks for stopping by.Your name is entered for a chance to win Pretty Omens.

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    2. Hello Janet,
      I love it when the reviews are as poetic as the book itself and it was such an honor to have folks say such nice things about my work. Sounds like I need to be reading your work as well.

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    3. Hi, Alexandria. I hope some day you do get to read my work.

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  9. Layers in exposition AND dialogue. Great concept. Much to learn in A LaFaye's Kidlit seminar. :) Would love to win a copy of Pretty Omens. :) Thanks Clara for bringing us this information.

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    1. Thanks for sharing thoughts about what resonated with you in this post, Gayle.

      Your name is entered for a chance to win Pretty Omens.

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    2. Gayle,
      I hope you will join my Kidlit College class. That would be wonderful! Hope to "see you" there!
      Alexandria

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  10. This was a most interesting post. I love the "voice" in Pretty Omens. This is my kind of read!

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    1. Thanks for sharing, Linda! I agree that the writing voice in Pretty Omens is powerful.

      Your name is entered for a chance to win the copy of PRETTY OMENS!

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    2. Linda
      Thank you! Voice is one my favorite aspects of writing. How about you?

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  11. This book sounds awesome and I appreciated Alexandria's explanation of her work. Please enter my name!

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    1. Carol,
      I hope you find that the book is as good as it sounds. Thank you.
      Alexandria

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  12. I thought you'd like this post, Carol. Pretty Omens is our cup of tea. Thanks for stopping by.

    Your name is entered for a chance to win!

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  13. Thanks, Clara, for hosting Alexandria. And thanks Alexandria for sharing your wisdom, especially with how busy you are!
    I agree that language is most important in writing; words, images, and titles make for a great book.

    The title of Pretty Omen sounds perfect for the book, and the girl on the cover is intriguing. Makes me want to read the book, and even Cassie's name gives a hint at a deeper meaning.
    I always learn something when I visit Clara's blog; I had never encountered the term "slanted dialogue," but it is something I'll remember. It makes perfect sense and the example demonstrates how important what is not said in a scene is equally or even more important than what is actually said.
    Excellent post!

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    1. Donna,
      Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I hope you'll consider checking out my blog Wordy wandering rest stop on Goodreads.
      Alexandria LaFaye

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  14. Thank you for sharing such thoughtful and kind words, Donna. As always, you show a generous heart.

    Your name is entered for a chance to win a copy of Pretty Omens.

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  15. Thank you, Alexandra, for sharing your thoughts on the writing process! PRETTY OMENS sounds like a phenomenal book and one my students would enjoy reading. Clara, please enter my name!

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    1. Tracey, Thanks so much for stopping by. Alexandria did give us some great teaching points for the art of writing, didn't she?

      Your name is entered for a chance to win a book for your student.

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    2. Tracey,
      Thank you for thinking of your student and reading the blog.
      Sincerely,
      Alexandria

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